Friday, October 26, 2018
17A- Elevator Speech 2
https://youtu.be/eZK_6LRxMF4
In the original elevator speech, I feel that I did not have enough quick stats on hand to use. I think that I was a little stiff and it showed through my body language. It is important to show confidence and passion through the voice and body language. I was more prepared for this one as I researched more items to use off of the top of my head. I am very passionate about this topic as it directly impacts me and close friends. In the previous comments, my peers said that they could see my passion, which is important. They also stated that I needed to loosen up a little bit with my hands and arms. I tried to make that happen in this video. I think that I changed a little with my projection of the speech even if the words did not come out quick enough on a couple of occasions. Overall, I feel this elevator speech was more effective
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Hi Tyler,
ReplyDeleteI think that the points you mentioned about improving were successfully completed with your second elevator pitch. I liked how you dressed yourself with a Florida Gator polo to establish your credibility as an advocate for student athletes in this circumstance. I also thought that you were solid at using your hands to express the statistics that you were presenting. All of this together helped me see as a viewer that what you had to say was not only important, but also a concept that I agree with and would want others to agree with me too.